Thursday, February 24, 2011

2. Love

She couldn't see his eyes.
He stared down at the floor, hands clasped together.
The girl chewed on her bottom lip nervously. Was he really that uncomfortable around her? She resisted the tears that threatened to burst out; she couldn't cry in front of him. Not in front of him. Anywhere but in front of him.
"Ashleigh..." He started softly.
"Yes?" She quickly replied. Anxiety was taking over her now.
"I just wanted to say-"
"That you hate me? That you don't like me? That I'm ugly and annoying and incredibly stupid?" She burst. She was self-conscious. She knew that was who she was.
"No..." He lifted his head now, and Ashleigh pushed back the temptation to sigh dreamily. Those adorable blue eyes that seemed to shine in the light every time amazed her. Mesmerized her. Perhaps that was what hypnotized her whenever they were around each other.
Oh, and with the bonus of his beautiful voice.
"No, I wasn't going to say that." His voice was firm. "I was going to say that I love you, that I do like you, that you're pretty and kind and incredibly intelligent."
"Y-you... love me?" A gasp escaped her. She wasn't expecting that.

"Yeah, I do. And do you love me back?" Back to his alluring tone again. Oh god.
A wide smile spread across her face, something that glittered with hope and admiration. "Yes."

Wednesday, February 23, 2011

Hey guys!

Sorry for updating recently; I've been busy with a lot of things...

Anyway, I put up a new chapter for Flash Shadows on inkpop so be sure to check it out! Currently working on the next chapter so keep a look out for that one(:
And I've also decided to do the 100 Themes Challenge. Here are the topics I'll be doing -

1. Introduction
2. Love
3. Light
4. Dark
5. Seeking Solace
6. Break Away
7. Heaven
8. Innocence
9. Drive
10. Breathe Again
11. Memory
12. Insanity
13. Misfortune
14. Smile
15. Silence
16. Questioning
17. Blood
18. Rainbow
19. Gray
20. Fortitude
21. Vacation
22. Mother Nature
23. Cat
24. No Time
25. Trouble Lurking
26. Tears
27. Foreign
28. Sorrow
29. Happiness
30. Under the Rain
31. Flowers
32. Night
33. Expectations
34. Stars
35. Hold My Hand
36. Precious Treasure
37. Eyes
38. Abandoned
39. Dreams
40. Rated
41. Teamwork
42. Standing Still
43. Dying
44. Two Roads
45. Illusion
46. Family
47. Creation
48. Childhood
49. Stripes
50. Breaking the Rules
51. Sport
52. Deep in Thought
53. Keeping a Secret
54. Tower
55. Waiting
56. Danger Ahead
57. Sacrifice
58. Kick in the Head
59. No Way Out
60. Rejection
61. Fairy Tale
62. Magic
63. Do Not Disturb
64. Multitasking
65. Horror
66. Traps
67. Playing the Melody
68. Hero
69. Annoyance
70. 67%
71. Obsession
72. Mischief Managed
73. I Can't
74. Are You Challenging Me?
75. Mirror
76. Broken Pieces
77. Test
78. Drink
79. Starvation
80. Words
81. Pen and Paper
82. Can You Hear Me?
83. Heal
84. Out Cold
85. Spiral
86. Seeing Red
87. Food
88. Pain
89. Through the Fire
90. Triangle
91. Drowning
92. All That I Have
93. Give Up
94. Last Hope
95. Advertisement
96. In the Storm
97. Safety First
98. Puzzle
99. Solitude
100. Relaxation

They're the topics that are usually used [meaning they're sort of the default ones] so I'll be working on those, since I need to update! UPDATE UDPATE UPDATE!

Here goes my first;

Introduction-
The wind blew in my face, accompanied by dust. Stray strands of hair flew everywhere, but I didn't bother to brush it back neatly. No, I didn't want to. All I wanted to do was to feel the wind.
The breeze was warm, despite the cold weather winter had brought us. The sun, hiding behind patches of clouds, was barely shining, but I didn't feel the slightest chill in my bones at all.

A smile stretched across my face as I squinted up at the sky.
It was the start of something new.


Tuesday, January 18, 2011

Ahah!

So I've been working on this pretty cool story recently [it's not yet public on inkpop] and it's called Hyper[active] Identities. I really hope people are gonna like it...

Anyway, I made the cover for it!

How do you like it? ;D

Saturday, January 15, 2011

Descriptive Scenes & More

Close your eyes and imagine it as if it were a movie. Then write it down/type it up. It's easier that way.

ANYWAY-

Hello, world!
I haven't been updating recently- and I apologise deeply for that. Christmas was a very busy holiday [I'm sure a lot of you can relate to that] but now I'm back! And I'll try to post more often.
So what's been happening so far in your lives of 2011?
I, for one, have been spamming my brain with the awesomness of Charlie McDonnell [aka charlieissocoollike]! I just love his accent. Don't you just love his accent? I love English accents(:

It's my solemn promise that I will try to update Down To Earth, but since I've been set a tight schedule by my parents, I haven't got much time to go on the computer.

Well, maybe at school I will.
What a bad girl I am. x]

Till next time!
Michii.

Saturday, December 11, 2010

Good Characters..

You can tell if you have a good character[s] by doing this very small activity-

Describe your character with five different words/phrases.
Support with evidence.

It works best if you do multiple at a time.

An efficient story has at least 3 varieties of different personalities. Try it on your characters!

Tuesday, December 7, 2010

NaNoWriMo

Just in case any of you don't know, NaNoWriMo stands for National Novel Writing Month, which is November. 
It is a month when all authors come together to create a novel in a month; but of course there are tricks to getting there faster.

One ; Patience and persistence. Never give up. If you do, you'll never be able to finish your story, thus concluding in self-acclaimed writer's block, which is only caused by your state of mind.
Two ; A good plot and good characters! If you bore yourself, you bore your readers. You could print out a workbook which the site [http://ywp.nanowrimo.org] offers for free.
Three ; Leave the fun/boring part for the last. Whatever it means to you. When you're writing, just WRITE. Don't mind the spelling and grammar errors, just WRITE. If you revise as you write, it'll be a long time til you finish your chapter.



I learnt that from experience, mind you. I gave up, I had a boring plot, and I revised as I wrote. How bad am I? xD.

Please, remember 2011's NaNoWriMo and have fun!